Evening sky darkens
Sun flees
Weeping
© 2019 Jason A. Muckley
This is a response to Esther Chilton’s challenge to write a story in six words…
Evening sky darkens
Sun flees
Weeping
© 2019 Jason A. Muckley
This is a response to Esther Chilton’s challenge to write a story in six words…
I’m a photographer too and that pic is inspiring! Great shot. Nice poem as well
Thanks! I got it on pixabay 😀
Love it! What are the rules for a haynaku?
It’s a three line poem… first line 1 word, second line 2 words, third line 3 words… variation includes a 3-2-1 arrangement like this. No rhyming limitations
I posted about this form last November… https://poemsforwarriors.wordpress.com/2018/11/10/haynaku-poetic-form-2/
Awesome. I probably saw it back then and just forgot. I’ll check it out though.
Cool! Thanks
Excellent piece, Jason!
Thank you 🙂
You’re welcome!