Evening sky darkens
Sun flees
Weeping
© 2019 Jason A. Muckley
This is a response to Esther Chilton’s challenge to write a story in six words…
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Poems for Warriors 
I’m a photographer too and that pic is inspiring! Great shot. Nice poem as well
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Thanks! I got it on pixabay 😀
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Love it! What are the rules for a haynaku?
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It’s a three line poem… first line 1 word, second line 2 words, third line 3 words… variation includes a 3-2-1 arrangement like this. No rhyming limitations
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I posted about this form last November… https://poemsforwarriors.wordpress.com/2018/11/10/haynaku-poetic-form-2/
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Awesome. I probably saw it back then and just forgot. I’ll check it out though.
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Cool! Thanks
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Excellent piece, Jason!
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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