long
steady
rain
big drops
wetting the lawn
saturating the earth
the quiet
inside
reigns
while the rumble
outside
roars
but the rain
carries on
rejuvenating
the scorched ground
refreshing
the thirsty soul
© 2023 Jason A. Muckley
Soul Rain #Nature #Rain #Poetry #Journey
Enjoy that rain Jason! We have rain too here in Ireland! xo
I love it!
Just got soaked here in Western PA last night as well – quite the storm! Did you mean “while” in line 10? Great inside/outside imagery ending with the soul.
Nice! Yes, I did. Funny enough, I wrote down the wrong word, too. Thanks for catching that.
Beautiful. I like the idea of a rainstorm as refreshment for the thirsty soul.
Thanks!
Love this so much.
Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed it 😊