
my first attempt
failed
now I feel
disqualified
to try again
© 2023 Jason A. Muckley
This is my submission for today’s “Word of the Day” challenge by Cyranny.
my first attempt
failed
now I feel
disqualified
to try again
© 2023 Jason A. Muckley
This is my submission for today’s “Word of the Day” challenge by Cyranny.
Hi Jason, this short poem really packs an emotional punch. Regarding divorce, it is definitely a shock to a person’s self-confidence. I think a large problem is the way society tends to frame divorce as if it is a “Failure.” Sometimes, divorcing and stepping away from an abusive or simply dysfunctional relationship is actually an act of kindness to your own mental health (and quite possibly the other person). I enjoyed reading your poem. Have a wonderful week.
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Thank you Jenny! This was very encouraging and on point!
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Such painfully profound words. A reality many have lived…
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Thanks! It is a tough road for sure.
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I can see how that feels logical.
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Thanks for reading… I am still processing what starting over looks like.
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With the right person, it will be easy and stress free
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Simple but true, about a lot of things.
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Thanks Julia! Good to hear from you 🙂
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nice Jason! Nice attempt!
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Thanks Carol Anne!
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