Seeing #Poetry #Journey

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I know those searching eyes
they match my own
looking for a kindness
a tenderness returned
every pair of eyes
yours meet
is an opportunity
to find the old soul
yours are searching for

© 2021 Jason A. Muckley

6 comments

  1. I love those last three lines, especially “the old soul / yours are searching for.” Some might hear that phrase and misinterpret the beauty and wealth of an old soul. It’s not about years or age, which some might see in a negative light, but depth and richness like Tom Bombadil, Treebeard, or Gandalf. (Couldn’t help but reference Tolkien!)

  2. ‘every pair of eyes/yours meet/is an opportunityto find/ the old soul/yours are searching for’ You have created a masterpiece,Jason dear 💖,especially these lines so very full of deep meaning!💕

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