I feel so awkward
I am not comfortable talking to anyone
Hearing my words escape my lips
I lose my nerve
I’ve lost confidence in that part of me
When I go looking for it
It feels like walking into a pitch black room that goes on forever
© 2020 Jason A. Muckley
Very powerful and relatable words. I struggle with socializing, too. You perfectly captured and illustrated how that feels. Great poem!
Thanks Haley! I really appreciate it
You’re so very welcome!
Spot on – relatable and poignant. For me, nearly a whisper in the delivery. ♡
Thanks Audrey! I am glad to know others feel this way too
Very accurate to the constant internal struggle of socializing. This poem was relatable and engaging. Great piece
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also, the picture accompanied with this piece perfectly depicts the message being said in this poem.
Thanks Elizabeth!
Spot-on poem. Fits me especially well.
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Yes, relatable.
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Welcome.
Oh, I can so empathize with this poem. I have felt this more times than I can count. Lovely, honest poem.
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Been there, brother. Great post!
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Wonderful poem
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Very nicely written poem. I enjoyed reading it. If you want to read some poems about nature, check out my blog- http://bloomingthoughts.home.blog
And keep up the good work
Thanks! Will do
This is relatable and gorgeous. It’s as if this was meant for me. Thank you for writing something so heartfelt. 💙
Yay! I am glad you found it (and me) 😁
Simple, powerful words … the naked truth. This hit me hard 🙂
Thank you for reading! I am glad it impacted you 🙂
A powerful and thoughtful message. Well done.
Thank you!
Beautiful. I needed this right now.
Thanks!
Great stuff. This is a really beautiful piece – short & sweet. I’ve been a writer for quite some time now but a total novice in poetry. I’d like to know what you think of this poem https://mayet8.wordpress.com/2020/04/18/shackled-2/
Beautifully penned. 👍
Oh, I love this, but I hope you haven’t suffered. I know how it feels.
Thanks Sarah
Short and sharp – I love it! Very modern in its approach to form, which has its merits even if I personally prefer writing or reading poems with more emphasis on their technical aspects.
Thanks! I am glad you liked it
That was touching poetry, we all feel vulnerable like that sometimes.
Thanks! That’s good to know