My strength
Fades in the night
Sapped of all my power
My eyes heavy – my body weak
Asleep
© 2018 Jason A. Muckley
This is my entry to Colleen Chesebro’s Tanka Tuesday prompt, vigor and energy.
My strength
Fades in the night
Sapped of all my power
My eyes heavy – my body weak
Asleep
© 2018 Jason A. Muckley
This is my entry to Colleen Chesebro’s Tanka Tuesday prompt, vigor and energy.
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This is a great Cinquain. I loved how easily your words flowed. 😀
Thanks Colleen! I am glad you like it. Thanks for the feedback
Always, Jason. 😀
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Hi Jason! Great Cinquain! I like the way you used the prompt words to give the poem the opposite feel of the words. Vigor – your strength is fading | Energy – sapped of all your power. Brilliant!
Thanks Vashti!