My strength
Fades in the night
Sapped of all my power
My eyes heavy – my body weak
Asleep
© 2018 Jason A. Muckley
This is my entry to Colleen Chesebro’s Tanka Tuesday prompt, vigor and energy.
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This is a great Cinquain. I loved how easily your words flowed. 😀
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Thanks Colleen! I am glad you like it. Thanks for the feedback
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Always, Jason. 😀
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Hi Jason! Great Cinquain! I like the way you used the prompt words to give the poem the opposite feel of the words. Vigor – your strength is fading | Energy – sapped of all your power. Brilliant!
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Thanks Vashti!
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