Why so glum darling?
Defeat marks your demeanor
It pains me to see
To where fled your radiance?
I miss your cheery smile
© 2018 Jason A. Muckley
Why so glum darling?
Defeat marks your demeanor
It pains me to see
To where fled your radiance?
I miss your cheery smile
© 2018 Jason A. Muckley
Hi, Jason! Nice to meet you. I’m glad you joined in this challenge. Your Tanka is marvelous, and a great take on the prompt words. Well done. 😀 <3
Thanks Colleen. It’s a fun challenge. Thanks for hosting it!
You’re so welcome. Hope to see you next week.
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Hello, Jason! I’m new to Tanka Tuesday also. Your tanka is beautiful and poignant. It touched me. 🙂
Well thank you for the glowing review… I appreciate the feedback and I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for reading!
You’re welcome. 🙂