
the persistent pattering
of raindrops
soothes my soul
a place of serene peace
satiated in her embrace
heartbeat thudding
raindrops tinkling
the rise and fall
of her breath
syncopated
into one
melody of refuge
© 2023 Jason A. Muckley
the persistent pattering
of raindrops
soothes my soul
a place of serene peace
satiated in her embrace
heartbeat thudding
raindrops tinkling
the rise and fall
of her breath
syncopated
into one
melody of refuge
© 2023 Jason A. Muckley
awe so nice Jason! A very serene poem!
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Thanks Carol Anne!
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Loving this rain series
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Thanks Cassa!
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Definitely love those last three lines – “syncopated / into one / melody of refuge” Music really is such a refuge and then to tie that to the music of two hearts beating as one while the rain beats on the roof – solid!
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Thanks Vincent!
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Oh my, is there anything better?
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I can’t think of anything 😉
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Beautiful post!
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Thanks Dwight!
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You are welcome!
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